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Fixed in 4.5.X
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590115
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Typos in Occlusion Culling documentation
There are several typos and grammar problems on this documentation page:
Unity Manual > Graphics > Graphics Overview > Cameras Overview > Occlusion Culling (Pro only)
With my local Unity installation the URL to this page is:
file:///Applications/Unity/Unity.app/Contents/Documentation/html/en/Manual/OcclusionCulling.html
Start sentences with capital letters here:
"…the view frustrum only. this technique…"
"…using portal culling. this technique…"
Fix typo:
"… set to the largest far clip planed…"
Change it to this:
"… set to the largest far clip plane…"
Remove extraneous "is" from this phrase:
"…create Occlusion Areas is by adding…"
End this sentence with a period:
"… to an empty game object (Component->Rendering->Occlusion Area in the menus)"
Change to plural "primitives" here:
"…to create occlusion primitive which are…"
Some of the items above are duplicated on the following pages and should be changed there as well:
Unity Manual > Graphics > Graphics Reference > Rendering Components > Occlusion Area (Pro Only)
file:///Applications/Unity/Unity.app/Contents/Documentation/html/en/Manual/class-OcclusionArea.html
Unity Manual > Graphics > Graphics Reference > Rendering Components > Occlusion Portals
file:///Applications/Unity/Unity.app/Contents/Documentation/html/en/Manual/class-OcclusionPortal.html
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RobertLumpkin
Jul 21, 2020 13:02
I think some of these sentences may not make sense as the program does not check for future,present and past tenses flies and for that reason can be grammatically correct to the program.
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